My Holiday writing
Kia ora, welcome back to my blog and today I am going to share some of my writing with you. My goal was to improve my orientation by using our senses. I hope you enjoy.
On the first day of the holidays after school I was ready to go home but I was waiting for the bell to ring. Suddenly the bell ring the teachers were still taking said good afternoon I went to my Aunt's house for a my cousins birthday it was fairies and mermaids but I did not have to dress up it was so fun we had unicorn
cupcakes, mermaid cake, jelly, popcorn, fruit and donuts.
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