The sausage roll
One cold freezing morning I was trying to get out of bed. After a few minutes, I finally decided to get out of bed. I felt hungry so I went to the kitchen there was a sausage roll on a plate. So I thought it was normal so I put it in the microwave and ate it. It tasted as it fell in my cat's smelly litter box. I grabbed the tomato sauce to make it taste better it didn't work so I went to watch tv with ice cream.
Nice story Aroha. I like that you used similes and described words. Also I really enjoyed the end when the character is eating ice cream. Even when it is freezing cold outside.
ReplyDeleteThank you for commenting on this post. The only reason why I put ice cream is because that is what I was thinking about at the time of the ending. do you like ice cream?
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ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your story good job. It is pretty hard to create a story out of random cards but I liked it. Good use of similes aswell.
trhank you chloe it was hard have random cards and creating a story.
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