W.A.L.T : Create an original sculpture using objects found on the beach.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, March 31, 2017
Beach tip art
Friday, March 17, 2017
Monday, March 13, 2017
The Present ever
In the past weeks our class (Ako Ngatahi) were writing a short story about a video titled “The Present”. It was a story about a boy who got a present and it was a puppy. After he discovered that the puppy only had three legs.
Here is the video.
W.A.L.T: Write a narrative
Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when….
- The title is suitable for the text.
- The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
- The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
- The resolution explains how the problem was solved.
The present
One morning I was playing on my x-box. My mum come home with a present. She opened up the blinds then.
I opened the present it was a puppy. It was so cute because it had big brown eyes. I looked at it’s legs I saw that the puppy had 3 legs. I threw the puppy on the floor because it was annoying me. Because he was distracting me from my game but I kept playing my game. Then he found a red ball under the desk. He run and bumped into the desk then he went under the desk and got the ball. He started to play with the ball. I watched him. I paused the game, then he grabbed the ball and gave it to me. I felt bad because I had been mean to him. I picked up the ball and put it in my pocket. We went outside and played catch. By Aroha The End.
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