I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, March 17, 2017
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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good work
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comment Tanaya. but next time can you be more Pacific.
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ReplyDeleteHi Aroha, I really loved what you wrote. It gave me the experience to write about dogs and how to be safe around them.
DeleteI never knew that you had to put your hand out and let the dog sniff it and what you wrote was a mind blowing expereince.
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DeleteThanks for your comment Bailey. But what else didn't you know about dog's?
DeleteWell I didn't know that when a dog is eating that you should leave it alone. There isn't any more that I didn't know about dogs.
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Deletewill if you don't leave the dog alone will it is eating they might bit you or get angry.
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DeleteThanks for the great conversation Aroha one day we might do it again.
DeleteHi Aroha,
ReplyDeleteI really like slide about dogs and how you said "You should ask a owner before you pat the dog. But next time you could put in your slide make sure you don't annoy a dog you don't know. Other then that you did awsome.
Hi Aroha nice work I think you should add more dog Pictures in the slide. I think you Might need to add more details in the slide bye.
ReplyDeleteThank you Jessica for your comment. But what slide do you think I should put more Pictures of dog.
DeleteKia Ora my name is Miriana and I am from Sockburn School. I loved this because it helps me and others to know how to take care of a dog. Yo taught me how to take care of my dog. Why did you want to create a slide about how to take care of a dog?
ReplyDeleteHi Aroha your dog safety poster is really good to experience. One day I might make a slideshow of my own about dog safety. It hade really blown my socks off like the wind blowing off my shoes.
ReplyDeletethank you for your comment but why did you write blown my socks off 2 time?
ReplyDeleteI didn't write blown of my socks twice I wrote down It had really blown my socks off like the wind blowing off my shoes.
DeleteSorry I had read that incorrect.
DeleteThat is okay. I don't really mind that.
Deletethanks for that because sometimes I read to fast
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