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Friday, September 7, 2018

My amazing Body #2


W.A.L.T explain what different body system are and how they work.

kia ora, this week we have been learning about four different body parts. They are Digestive system, Nervous system, Muscular system and The Respiratory System. The Digestive system it's job is to get the nutrient out of the food you eat. The Nervous system sends messages to your brain, your Muscular system help you to move and they are connected to some of your bones. The last and final one the Respiratory system The Respiratory system helps you to breathe in and out. when you are eating your trachea will close up so you don't chock on your food.



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7 comments:

  1. Hi Aroha. I really like that in your introduction you have put in a little bit of knowledge that you know about all of them. The only thing that bothers me is your punctaction. I couldn't really read what you had in your DLO because you had different font's and in your introduction because it had not been re read. Over all of that, in your DLO I like how much information you had put into your DLO. I really like the rest of your writing. keep it up.

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  3. You also need to check your spelling.

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    1. thank you for commenting on my blog Baliey I will cheek my spelling when I get time.

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  4. great work aroha good to see you keeping up with your goals that you have set yourself

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    1. thank you for commenting on my blog I would like if you give me some feedback on my this blog post.

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  5. Hi Aroha
    I like your work because you added a lot of description.
    Next time you fix up your spelling.
    It reminds me of when when I do work like that.
    i like your work aroha

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