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Wednesday, August 12, 2020

Gold Rush Poem

Gold Rush Poem


Gold is rare

Gold was found

Gold can get you heaps of money 

Gold feels like stone.

Gold looks shiny 

Gold buys money.

Gold makes people happy 

Gold often is a lot harder to find than you think 

Gold comes from the ground 

Gold always hard to find 

Gold brings money 

Gold gives you happy people and also unhappy people 

Gold has a way to make money 

Gold will help peoples

Gold provides people with money 


Acrostic Poem

Gold 

Otago

Lots of water 

Discovered 


Rare 

Under 

Sifted 

Heavy 


2 comments:

  1. Very poetic Aroha! I like your choice of vocabulary in the acrostic poem. Have you ever tried panning for gold?

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  2. Beautifully poetic...I like your focus on how rare it is, 'hard to find' etc. Have you ever tried panning for gold?

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